I confess, though I think I read a little further than the status bar, I had to give up. The plot is original and I did like the world-building. But I had some issues with what tvtropes calls 'unfortunate implications' that seemed to be developing, like fat people=evil (or at least shallow and unprincipled).But for a self-published novel, this is probably on the high end. I would recommend a good developmental editor, though, for the rest of the series, like the awkward POV switching, and a tighter focus on the story.